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Jessibuns

09-16-2010 09:00 PM

Cure Me

I have been blinded.
Blinded by a sight so beautiful.
My lips form your name,
But not a sound escapes.

I just met the boy.
The boy at the end of my dreams.
The boy at the end of the hall.
The boy nobody knows.

Is it possible,
For a boy so beautiful,
To Cure Me?

Vanitas

09-19-2010 03:42 PM

So beautiful and simple. It reminds me of how I used to find a boy so beautiful and no one really paid him much attention or really understood him. This really captures the beginning stages of love or whatever.

Jessibuns

09-19-2010 06:16 PM

Thank you.
(:

Kotomi

09-24-2010 09:09 AM

I'm left with a kind of unfinished feeling, it slightly haunts me (as if it is deeper than just words)
a very nice poem

Morgan

09-24-2010 09:15 AM

Lovely!

Jessibuns

09-24-2010 01:41 PM

Thanks everyone.
(:

Bookworm_Ninja

09-24-2010 10:32 PM

Beautifully haunting, conveys wonder to me :) always a good poem when you can sense the emotions

Jessibuns

09-27-2010 06:32 PM

Glad you like it.
(:

Rave	10-05-2010 04:06 PM

I love the simplicity. A lot of people try to hard to complicate poetry. But I think the emotion is conveyed very well and it's definitely striking.

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