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Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 01:58 AM

Shouldn't the next part really just be, "...and so the story begins" or something and lead into the rp?

Reyoki 07-30-2011 02:00 AM

I guess, but I have to make it more poetic than that. XD Maybe something like...

Thus beings our story of the Chaos Knights.

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 02:02 AM

Hmmm I like it, the wording is a little awkward though, at least when I read it. Spoken it sounds okay

Reyoki 07-30-2011 02:05 AM

It's probably because I used proper grammar and everything. It really bothers me when poetic stuff doesn't use proper grammar.

Poggio 07-30-2011 02:06 AM

I like it and give you the thumbs up of love and approval.

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 02:09 AM

It wasn't the grammar, cause it is technically correct, it was the use of our I think. But I dun know who is actually telling the into, so I dun know if it is supposed to be from a knights pov

Reyoki 07-30-2011 02:11 AM

I dunno. It just seemed like how it should be done to me, like how some people begin reading like, "Our story begins in a far off land many, many years ago" and all that jazz.

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 02:14 AM

Well I honestly didn't read the first part, I think I missed it somewhere. So if it starts out in a knights pov, then it's okie dokie, if not then I think it should be "the story," but that's just a personal preference.

Reyoki 07-30-2011 02:16 AM

The POV is kind of ambiguous, I think. It could by from a Knight's POV, but then again it could be from someone else's POV just as easily.

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 02:17 AM

Well the ambiguity ends once "our" is used XD, but if that's what you were going for *thumbs up*

Poggio 07-30-2011 02:18 AM

XD it can be from squiggles pov the official bard rubber duck of the knights.

Reyoki 07-30-2011 02:18 AM

I changed it so that it's ambiguous the whole way through. I like the flow better.

XD Dear sweet Anka, he's going to love that title.

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 02:22 AM

There's a rubber duck?

Reyoki 07-30-2011 02:23 AM

Yup, he's Kami's mortal enemy. I think he's in the bath right now. You wanna meet him?

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 02:24 AM

I think I do...Do I?

dragoness129 07-30-2011 02:25 AM

http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/j...links/orbs.png

Hmm, I need to chat more again.

Reyoki 07-30-2011 02:26 AM

Hey Dragon! *licks* Have you met Squiggles yet?

dragoness129 07-30-2011 02:26 AM

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I do not think I have.

Squiggles 07-30-2011 02:31 AM

*rises up out of a puddle* Fear not, fair maidens! Squiggles has returned!

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 02:32 AM

Ahhhh *swats the things the appears out of the puddle* Wha is it?!

dragoness129 07-30-2011 02:32 AM

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Army of Rubber Ducks. That is adorable. ^_^

Ludovico 07-30-2011 02:33 AM

Squiggles!!!! -gives him a cookie and his very own Lute-

dragoness129 07-30-2011 02:35 AM

http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/j...links/orbs.png

Ten more jewels to go and I can make good on the offer I posted.
I plan to get them before going to bed. ^_^

Squiggles 07-30-2011 02:38 AM

*squeaks at being struck* Well, it would seem this maiden has some fight in her! I like that in a woman.

Yes, my beauty, they are indeed quite the adorable bunch... mostly.

*skips the cookie but grabs the lute and proceeds to strum* A duck could get used to this. You can keep the cookie for that dreadful little chinchilla. I don't eat things like that; too full of happy feelings and good will.

dragoness129 07-30-2011 02:40 AM

http://i3.squidoocdn.com/resize/squi...._SL500_AA300_
Another adorable one to add to your collection. ^_^

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 02:42 AM

Happy feelings and good will?...Those nutricious?

dragoness129 07-30-2011 02:43 AM

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It is going to be hard to sleep tonight with it being so hot here.

Ludovico 07-30-2011 02:46 AM

-gives cookie to dragon and Mirror-

Squiggles 07-30-2011 02:49 AM

Squiggles does not digest well the foods of happy deliciousness for small children. No, Squiggles will have his cabbage rolls. Yes, cabbage rolls and grapefruit juice.

Sleep well, lovely maiden! Squiggles will play a tune on his lute to bring you sweet dreams during your slumber!

dragoness129 07-30-2011 02:50 AM

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Thanks very much for the cookie. ^_^

I am not planning on going to bed yet as I am still trying to gain a few more victories. ^_^

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 02:57 AM

Yay! Cookie! Thank you *takes cookie and it catches on fire* ...whoops

Ludovico 07-30-2011 02:59 AM

Oi -gives mirror a cookie full of liquid nitrate-

Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 03:01 AM

*stares at the cookie*...It looks cold

Lauv Keiko 07-30-2011 03:16 AM


Mirror Gardens 07-30-2011 03:19 AM

*is never going to be able to enjoy a normal cookie*

Ludovico 07-30-2011 03:20 AM

OuO KEIKKO!!!! -lavishes her with love-

Squiggles 07-30-2011 03:21 AM

*twirls Keiko, dips her, and smooches her* Well, hello there my delectable beauty.

Lauv Keiko 07-30-2011 03:27 AM


Squiggles 07-30-2011 03:29 AM

Me? Why, Squiggles is the arch nemesis of Kami and newly-appointed bard to the Knights of Chaos. *bows*

Lauv Keiko 07-30-2011 03:31 AM



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