![]() |
*hugs Ginger*
If it makes you feel any better I don't have a Halloween costume, actually haven't for years because I couldn't afford to get/make one. ^^; |
I made up a creepy kinda campfire story.
Quote:
|
Ah, okay. XD What did they name the pet? :o
|
|
They named a phoenix Steve? XD No wonder you thought it was funny. XD I would have named him Nova. :3
|
I like the story, Tam :D
|
Quote:
Why? |
Well, for one, it mixes Sci-fi with the sort of 50's horror. For another, it has an interesting twist on the nombies (Meant to type zombies, but mistyping left this funny variation - NOMBIES! Nom nom nom). Finally, you leave on a semi-cliffhanger, which often good horror does to various degrees (and bad horror tries to do and fails).
Some "show, not tell" would help, as would splitting up the paragraph to make it more readable (one may help the other). In other words, describe the despair felt at the cries of babes and women shrieking out in terror over the frozen earth shadowed by near-endless nights, until they died away in the morn. Build up the paranoia felt by the farming family, by spoken words. |
Lawtan!! *runs at you with outspread arms* I'm the most ravenous bookworm right now! I need some good crisp paper seasoned with lovely writing and thought your library would be just the place to find some!
*grabs Tam's story, stuffs whole into mouth* Mmm... Tam that was so CUTE! <3 |
*Bows* I bid you to enjoy my collection of public domain books to your heart's content.
*Is glomphed* You are most welcome (Forgive me, but I have been writing, drawing, and listening to old Horror flicks where everyone talks like Vincent Price, Dracula, or screams xD) *Flails* I am drawing the characters for my stories! Yes! Also, would it be bad taste to make a man with a deformed head, and wielding a whip made from a spinal chord...a medieval mechanic, horsemen, and a musician? |
Lawtan, errr, could you show me what you mean?
Quote:
|
I'm working on the first page of my comic... and listening to music on Spotify.
|
Umm, well;
That was what I meant. It was not really meant as criticism...more among the lines of "if you wanted to improve on the story...make it more of a short story... |
@Law
That's creepy. ^^; |
Quote:
Also, can you imagine writing something up on this? |
I'd sooner use ye old label/sticker device...
Or an actual typewriter... It's the I-Watch of the 1900's |
Quote:
Here's a whole page for the library. I never knew about these typewriters till today, when Den started asking what I thought of various models of old keyboard writers and I googled for pictures and found a reference to this page. |
There's one that looks like a pocket watch. XD
|
It does, kinda. *chuckle*
One of the hardest things I've found so far in trying to translate my story into a comic is telling the story visually, and trying to figure out how to condense the scenes and moments into 3-6 panels a page. |
Have you tried looking at what other comics do with their plot? Actually, have you heard of 1/2 Prince? That originally started as a book and was then turned into a manga. I'd do a comparison of the two to see how the author had that done since it could help. :3 And I'd think you would only need to do that for the first few chapters.
|
Well, most comics I see sort of buildup via conversation and background events, to a single page or two of pure action...
Don't know if that would work or not. |
Two panels on the second page done... third panel's up... then I need to figure out the layout for the rest of the page.
|
I'm sticking with words forever LOL.
|
I want to make a mini comic eventually, but don't know if I'll ever actually get it done. x'D
|
I hope to one day do a comic as well...
|
Would you be doing the art, or someone else?
|
Myself...
I am working on the storyline, but it is a complicated thing... |
Ah, neat! XD I don't actually have a story written out because I want it to be like a book, but I do have a story I want to write about an OC I have. It will be two parts and then go into a friend's comic. XD One of her OC's ends up marrying my OC. XD It's complicated, but she's a demon that serves as the head priestess for a god of this this (which is roughly the size of Japan) and he's a good, like she's a good demon, but the god didn't always like mortals, both humans and demons, but she was able to get him to see everyone has the potential to be good.
|
>.> I found this on facebook: http://www.selkbagusa.com/Selk%27bag-Marvel.aspx
|
I have no idea what that is? o.O
|
*Claps for Den*
I am about to fall asleep...I apologize if I can't keep up with everyone at the moment. |
It's okay, no biggy. XD
|
Basically, they're sleeping bags you can walk around in.
|
x'D
I'd rather have blankets I can bundle up in, but those would make for neat costumes. XD |
*falls asleep in the thread*
|
*lightly dusts faux with sparklies*
|
*cuddles with Fauxreal*
|
*boops some sparklies on lawtan*
|
*plays with Crystal's smoky stuff* XD
|
Oh my. :o No one's noticed my whispies before.
|
All times are GMT -4. The time now is 12:38 AM. |
Powered by vBulletin®