*bounces around* evening everyone!

hey airina

hmmm? Whats up?

Hey cronislee, haven't seen you around in quite a while

I'm always on, you just kept missing me :)

Doh! epic fail on my part. anyway it's good to see you boss-man

Alrighty, I shall pm you what I think XD. I'm not sure if it will be helpful ( since I have no idea about grammar structures and what not. And I have to warn you I'm big on character development ><

Hi Cron.

.o. ugh crov you made me feel sad .o.

I'm grammar nazi man! and I didn't do much character development because it's meant to be sort of like a one-shot

Then pay no attention to half of my comment XD.

heh, nice man

Well the thing is even with a one shot there can be character development .o.

there is some of course, you learn about the character from his decisions and inner monologues but its less than an actual story would have

which makes sense, i have to admit.

heh, yay me

Lol well I it depends on the pace of the story. If its a 6 word story then there doesn't need to be one.

And even in longer novels I guess its a stylistic choice. But since i always thought Character was the way people connected with the story, they need to be identifiable and redeemable.

well my character descends into evil and corruption he isn't redeemable in the slightest, he's meant to come off as a smart alecky morally lacking mercenary who serves only himself for power and/or wealth

You know thats what alot of people said about lucifer in paradise lost and yet so many people identify with him.
I guess that is what I mean just couldn't find a better word for it. And every one is redeemable unless they choose not to be, just look at faust, even in the end all he had to do was repent yet he couldn't bring himself to say the lords name.

you know the basis of the faustian bargain and you know paradise lost? new best friend!! good to meet you!

"is this the face that launched 1000 ships?"
More so Faust then Paradise lost, but I have friends that are fanatics of Paradise lost. I am a Marlow girl.
XD Hello Friend -Hugs Corvus- Your also the one that reads Jim Butcher am I correct?

I have Ghost story on pre-order

XD you so and so, I'm going to wait for it to be in stores. I think I bought the last one the day it came out, and finished it 8 hours later throughly confused.

-poofs in-

Epically sore legs.

hah, I loved changes, what a book...what a book...

Hello Espy!

TT^TT I hope that his offspring becomes a wizard and that Molly finds her and takes care of her but since its only passed down through the mothers thats not likely to happen.

....Nice avi's, everyone.

Lol do they look better upside down, bouncing off the ceiling?

I'm gonna get hella dizzy.

Lol at least they are on randomizer, another site I visit decided to do that, it gets confusing because i can't find my post @..@

What do you mean, they're on randomizer?

Basically every page instead of having your avatar set the way you had it, it is a different set of items and base for every post.

-totally not confuzzled- I'll pretend I know what you're talking about; my brain turned into fried eggs a while ago.

-Eats Espy's brains with a little bit of salt-
Basically every time you saw an avatar it was different.

It's like that right now?

It was it switched back because its no longer april fools day.

AWW ARE YOU KIDDING ME... -sniffle-

LOL -Huggles Espy-
Maybe again next year?

.o. don't give coda any ideas now .o.

Its length and due date is on the front page.