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Tohopekaliga 11-03-2016 02:47 PM

Well, what people are wearing doesn't have to be an important detail. :P

I mean, it might be an important detail, but...perhaps not.

Maybe they're all nudists, and you'll do a sudden reveal of that 2/3 the way through.

trystan830 11-03-2016 02:49 PM

LOL that's funny, Toho!!

if i describe clothing and stuff, i get more word that way. XD

Tohopekaliga 11-03-2016 02:50 PM

It's true, but NOT describing it means more words go into story. :P

And getting to big reveal their nudistry.

trystan830 11-03-2016 02:55 PM

LOL... BUT there's no nudists, so :P

Tohopekaliga 11-03-2016 03:30 PM

So the reader thinks, right? :P

Gallagher 11-03-2016 03:32 PM

i never write about things like clothing or anything until they either become important to the story, or additional description is needed to slow the flow of a scene. i prefer to describe body language over scenery and props.

trystan830 11-03-2016 03:36 PM

sure, Toho, whatever you say....

Galla, i'm like that too. but with NaNo, i try add all kinds of descriptions - it's my 'fluff -n- stuff.' otherwise, my 50,000 word story is over and there's only 30,000 words? hey, it could happen.

Tohopekaliga 11-03-2016 04:16 PM

XD

Well, yeah, I rarely put much detail into clothing and such when I write stuff either.

Glitch 11-03-2016 06:22 PM

I do only if I am trying to establish something about the character like . . . say a girl thinks she is very high fashion but then has some tacky kids wristwatch on, something like that.

trystan830 11-03-2016 06:49 PM

yep, i'll do that too, Glitch.

Potironette 11-03-2016 10:29 PM

"With victory assured, Lincoln finished his sandwich and coffee on election night in Springfield and prepared for his awesome new responsibilities."
I am so happy that this is in my textbook <3

Glitch 11-18-2016 04:32 PM

gotta stay motivated to do work!

it is so hard!

Tohopekaliga 11-18-2016 04:41 PM

you can do it! :D

Glitch 11-18-2016 06:30 PM

my grandma bought me a poncho that looks like a sheep today o3o

I'm in love.

I want to make it for Trisphee. xD

dragoness129 11-20-2016 10:23 PM

That sounds adorable!
I saw some animal winter hats. They were super cute!

daikokunyo 11-20-2016 11:38 PM

Glitch I wanna see I wanna pic. :B


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