I can't say I've ever visited 4chan, but I did read some lovely fanfictions earlier that were quite pornographic in nature.

XD i like how as soon as porn is offered up in the topic funky is all over it

XD Yes, funny how that happens... like how I showed up in a thread earlier as soon as TV Tropes was mentioned.

never heard, what is it?

It's a vortex of knowledge that will suck you in and from which you will never escape! *cackles maniacally*

.....er, o-kay- 0.0;



so crazy aside how is sweetie today?

I can link you to my favorite page if you'd like.

I'm kinda pissed off, but that's pretty much a constant thing with me. How about you?

Notice the word "Edit" on that post. I didn't even know. XDDD

yucky but well, what is causing the pissiness? anything i can help with?

meh~ edit or not good timing XD

/rolls in
hi everyone

Oh, there are many contributing factors to my ever-present pissy mood. Family drama is a big part of it, though; trust me, you don't want to get me started. Today there was an overabundance of immaturity on another site I frequent, too.

hi sweetie<3


did you get to knock any heads together at least?

I hope I'm not coming in at a super awkward time
but
internet immaturity happens
i'm sorry to hear it happened to you D:

@Choco: No, but I did complain to the thread owner for not properly micro-managing. He'd stated that it was to be a PG thread, but things were delving into the NC-17 zone... and he was a part of it.

@Darling: Yes, unfortunately it does. I don't say anything about it most of the time and just let the anger from it fester inside until I start feeling particularly... creative. That's when I draw my best art.

so if i want pretty arts i have to be mean to you?

art is good :0
use your anger to channel and make great art
do you mind me asking which site this was? if so feel free to ignore the question

scaylla is a teacher(enough) can he give me constructive crit on a picture? reyoki too if she'd like, there is something terribly....off about it and all the technical errors i find are not what is doing it

I can : ) i teach german and english though lol

i just need someone who won't crow about the 'glorious amazingness' of it just because i am the one drawing it |:[

i know it's shit and a failed art i just need to know /why/ it bothers me so much to look at it;
http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z.../lapland-4.png

hok
lets do this
first off, good things: I like the concept. composition is pretty decent - there's not a ton of white space or clutter or garbage ruining. colors contrast fairly well though i'd definitely put more darks in teh sheets/pillow
the bad: something about his face is off, i think it's the eye closest to us and the ear is a bit too far forward. the eyebrows bother me too, they seem too small and close together. the right hand facing us looks awkward and should probably be given a little more depth and the pillows its on need to squish more
moving on the the hair the way it drapes over his body gets weird, like when its falling over his shoulder it seems like there should be more hair up top to constitute the amount falling from his arm
right ankle, one closest to us should prolly be thinner, and slope the leg a bit more.
face, you might want to make the chin a bit stronger depending on what you're going for but the way the chin is now is fine too
haha i hope that helps, sometimes i'm pretty useless when it comes to critiquing

so you see the hair too? and you think it needs to have more on top? how about an overall reduction?

Either reduce the hair down bottom or make it thicker on top, because it ddoesn't flow the way it is now
also i was wrong about composition being hok, something about it bothers me... it's like something isn't right. I have to figure out what

;^; if you do and it's the same thing that bothers me i will give you art as a gift, i just have not had something happen like this in a very long tome and to be so in the dark as to /why/ is beyond me

i hate that, when I'm looking at something and i'm like "what is wrong with this" and everything bothers me about it but I don't know WHAT

yeah...it makes me feel so stupid too because it is usually something that when you notice it it just sorta /clicks/

though here is a distraction to get rid of the bad taste of the last one; http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z...range/zosa.png

I GOT IT
there's a little too much headspace from the tip of his head to the top of the picture, and the weird framething on the left takes away from the picture, because of the color. if it were a little darker or lighter ( i think lighter) it would probably blend better.

it was funky before that, the bg was a means of correcting the issue

I can see it being funky without it too
gimme some minutes

i think it's just his lumpy head :\

i mean, his eyes are so big they never look right anyway and the round of his nose only works with his head tipped a bit more and the haircut looks terrible when it's not in the braid

The eyes are definitely messing it up
I actually think it's the entire head now that you mention it
it doesn't sit right within the picture
i still think you should add some colour contrast among the sheets and whatnot

THERE WE GO
the far side of his face is what's bothering me! it's a little too thin and doesn't accomodate for his cheekbones and right eye
it makes the head too narrow

ja, though no editing, it's a done thing unless i get too weird, though here is a not failure art of him;
http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z...mp8ocxx-14.png

oh.....well damn, you were really close and can have your art anyway, the right is fine, if you follow the neck that is how it is /supposed/ to be but look at the left, it's way too far over it's nearly front-facing

I guess that may help too
whatever fixes it
haha i'm no use if its not my art lol

tell me what you want drawn and i'll work on it in the morning when i wake up<3

Awww thank you C:
but I don't need art
I just wanna chat or something

i can try and stay awake a little longer

If you want to, I'm not keeping you up
besides Im rping with some people right now
except its not going too well +_______+