it isn't size sweetie, it's dynamics, you should try different poses, then you can get an idea on how to shade and have things hang(though since i only have shown you my shitty art it doesn't mean much coming from me)

not for selling sweetie, for practice^^:

well i am an asshole by default but i feel bad for it anywhere other than deviant, i don't want to be rude but i do want to help and i am not sure how to do both and you'd be offended if i said it the way i phrased it in my head

ok sweetie but don't get mad i've had 6 years to get nicer and still can't do it^^:

long and short of it you doll like a beginner, the lines are stiff and irregualar and look pasted on instead of like they were drawn all together, you have good color sense and can back a fair horse with your base choice but you need to get a better understanding on how fabric lays not only against itself but how it lays with gravity under it, i can help you find tutorials on that but it's one of those things you cannot mimic nly realize

also i don't lke your shading, but that could just be your style though picking a lighting direction and sticking to it is a good idea(even if it's is hard sometimes) one of the girls i used to watch has nice tuts on that if you'd like a link as well

you have a lot of potential sweetie and i really would like to see it realized, with some expirimenting you could find something great but that is a lot of practice and failed arts away

*has been summon by Choco's new avatar's prettyness*

Hello, again ^^;
*have no idea what they are talking about at the present moment*

yes^^: have been group banned for as much and ragged on for less(though occasionally i /do/ troll it up if i didn't take a sec to reiterate before posting)


haha, who the hell /reads/ art tutorials? give me a minute to drag them up<3

Ah ok! Well, as long as you weren't disrespectful I don't see why they should ban you O_o


And lol for the art tutorial comment, though wait a sec, speaking of tutorial... There Moon, you may actually like those ones, it's about digital art and how to color and shade like crazy *is in total love with the artist's work*
http://sandara.deviantart.com/gallery/10727768

http://scenefag.deviantart.com/gallery/24509806 ignore the newest dev's base, it looks like a naruto trace i'mma go check

Critic on DA aren't that bad, it depends where you critic I guess lol. Personally the only 'bad' critic I received is on my Sephiroth and Aerith picture, but heck was he right about what he said, my shading was indeed weird on Aerith's coat thingie lol.

some people have the emotional fortitude or five-year-olds


that and i revised myself twice trying to make my post as kind as i could


and don't be mad, i mislead you on the drawings, we really are closer to the same level^^: i just didn't want it to come out as only my trashing your art