yep, aka tomorrow. LOL-

I'm cooking now, i'm hungry orz

yes~

ooh, what are you making?

just come congee. |D we're out of cooked rice.

aha |D was it good?

the only advice I can give you is that even the best art can not save you if you have a bad story. Its kinda the skeleton that brings the art to life. So make sure you have alot of things worked out and flushed.

yup, I also need to work on the scripting and pacing. |D;;
making people help me with that lolol. other details I have planned but it'll be a good while before I'm even able to execute them.


congee is average, takikikiki. b:

My only other thing is that even pages with just two people talking need a little dynamism. I would trying playing around with face shots next time you have pages of just too people talking, perhaps a close up of the main characters expression or something.

yep, trying that for later pages. these recent ones have actually been sitting on my comp for a few months now. OTL

XD haha So I just realized I watched your blog.
So what is the over all arching idea of your comic?

orly? 8D


It's... well, there's two sides of the story, one half following yomi and what he does with EON and the other following biido on his search for his verinum. They'll cross eventuallyyyy- at like, the end of arc 2 LOL. can't give away much more than that right now. b:

Yeah I started watching your blog when I first joined tris about two years ago.

Hmmm and who are these people?

hohoho glad to hear. 8)

biido and yomi. biido's not officially introduced until chapter 2 which will take 5ever ~~~

/cries

XD ah it makes a bit more sense when I read the prologue. I thought it just started from chapter one. And yeah the pacing is a bit off.

chapter 1 is pretty slow, chapter 2 will probably be kind of slow too, but it'll pick up from there.

this one-page-at-a-time deal isn't working wonders for the pacing either rofllll. it's supposed to be consumed a chapter at a time. "orz

Even though its a page at a time have you thought about doing over all thumbnails for an entire chapter?

all the pages for chapter 1 are sketched/storyboarded, but I have to make a few adjustments to the coming pages. andddd yeah. I intend to sketch each chapter out before actually drawing them. "orz