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It took me a bit to get them.
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GAL! <3 *runs to the gal and stops to offer a hug*
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-HUG- ... -chews on shoulder-
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AWE i love you to gal <3 *lets gal chew*
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o3o omnom. Like my new zombie outfit? It's a little more subdued than normal, but I rather like the face.
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I do like it, but why are your legs made of roots if your a zombie? o-o
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o.o huh? Wat? what did the Frost miss?
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They're growing around. See, I have boots under.
I think I might be a petrified zombie this time. |
Oh okay that makes more sensee! OH Gal be a critic and judge my siggy poem for me ? :3
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Phew, finally done changeing my avi.
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Mm... The theme is good, the rhyme scheme a bit predictable and unfitting with it though, and using the same words for your Bs is a little cheap with one that short.
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OMG foxo it is gorgeous :D
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Ah darn must work on it then x_X.. I will make a poem that gal approves of this i swear XD
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Natsu, aw thanks :3
I'm not really into poetry, so I can't help :p |
The short long short - - - long short long visual that the lines have is rather nice. I don't know if it was done on purpose, but I'd keep it.
I like the foxy's outfit as well. |
I've always liked Trisphee's layering system.
It makes making an avatar easier. |
I like the higher standards it gives for truly spectacular avatars. Other sites, no one would take notice if there was a slight lack of color at, say, your arms or legs. Things like getting the right expression don't matter quite so much.
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And if they do notice the slight colors off, its like....
What am I suppossseeee to do?! Cause it often makes you take off another item and stuff. |
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Exactly! Here, there's no excuses, and you can learn so many tricks from everyone else.
I mean your rhyme scheme Bs. Your poem goes: A A B C C B |
OH You mean the word mine.. i was trying to figure what word you were trying to point out.. I know i need to fix it.. it was going to be
A A B C C D but it didn't work out the way i planned.. |
I'm honestly not a fan of matching lines right next to each other with themes like this. It distracts from the feeling. Most rhyme does, really, but it should at least be separated more. Maybe try ABA CDC? Or something, I don't know.
The trouble with poems is that they have to be really spectacular to stand out. |
Ill try it that way, i just felt it went good that way.. I was wrong though so, oh well just gives me room to learn :).. Although ive been writing for years.. I have never had anyone help me out with writing so i hope you don't mind me asking you to look it over and what not..
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I know what you mean. Having someone to compare notes with makes such a difference, it's amazing.
I mean, as nice as it is to hear your stuff is great, that never really helps anyone get better. |
I need more items ;////; I tried my best though -sniffle-
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Tru fax, tru fax. But hey, willing to listen to help in and of itself makes such a difference.
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Well, i know that you have critiqued something i wrote before and i thought "why not just ask gal again" XD
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Nyahaha, I love talking about junk.
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Gal is just a wonderful person to talk to XD!
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ur face is wonderful
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*GASP* THAT IS AN AWEFUL THING TO SAY GAL D:
AND HERE I WAS GOING TO SAY YOU LOOKED MAGNIFICENTLY HIDEOUS TODAY D': </3 |
lololol, you a dork.
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Thank you so much gal <3 I love that compliment ^^
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I know, bbydoll. I know.
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Gal should post more often in natsu's thread <3
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Psh. I do wut I want.
I do need to post more, though. My aurum is getting really low. Which is sad considering I only use it to get ADIs. |
I never said you had to i just suggested i mean if the gal doesn't love natsu enough to post in his thread i understand :'( </3
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Blah blah blah, go fix me some more tea.
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Why should i?!? You gonna make me D:<
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