*bounces around* evening everyone!

hey airina

hmmm? Whats up?

Hey cronislee, haven't seen you around in quite a while

I'm always on, you just kept missing me :)

Doh! epic fail on my part. anyway it's good to see you boss-man

Alrighty, I shall pm you what I think XD. I'm not sure if it will be helpful ( since I have no idea about grammar structures and what not. And I have to warn you I'm big on character development ><

Hi Cron.

.o. ugh crov you made me feel sad .o.

I'm grammar nazi man! and I didn't do much character development because it's meant to be sort of like a one-shot

Then pay no attention to half of my comment XD.

heh, nice man

Well the thing is even with a one shot there can be character development .o.

there is some of course, you learn about the character from his decisions and inner monologues but its less than an actual story would have

which makes sense, i have to admit.

heh, yay me

Lol well I it depends on the pace of the story. If its a 6 word story then there doesn't need to be one.

And even in longer novels I guess its a stylistic choice. But since i always thought Character was the way people connected with the story, they need to be identifiable and redeemable.