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I see June has been talking about me! :O
Anyway, Hi everyone! I'm Keagan. :3 And the Lucky Star bribe did not work as I haven't watched it in like a year. xDD But I came because you are hurrrrr. :B derpderphurhur. |
Dang! I should've thought of the bribe more befoe I used it... >>
And rawr. -tackles Keagan without death- My brother finally came 8D |
that is wonderful. Welcome
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Thanks for the welcome! ^^
*wags tail* I finally got my wolf tail after an hour of posting and fighting. xD I feel quite accomplished! Now to get better clothes and better hair, haha. :S I hope I'll be able to get 40 feathers before the event ends though. So far I have 11. |
I have swords like no other I need give away.
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Back again, I just finished editing down and posting the latest part of my story. I cut it down by about 12 paragraphs...
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Lovely Axion, where is it at?
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Kea and I are both saving up for the same thing. And Hi again, Axion! Congrats on finishing your editing. I have a natural editor's complex so I edit anything I see :c
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Ooh! What are you writing? I'm currently working on a story. Well, I should be haha. I need to work on a semi-creative story for school, and my own story just for personal enjoyment.
What's your story about if you don't mind me asking? |
Feathers I'm saving up for something.
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Well I end up editing these about six or seven time before I'm satisfied with them. But it's the next post from the "RP". I don't really call it an RP now honestly, it's just a story.
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lol That one, so then you are not moving on.
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Which one do you speak of, Axion?
Kea: What is your assignment anyway? I WANNA SEE >O |
Nikko: No I'm moving on, I'm just moving on by myself, with a little help from you, although I don't think the furniture is needed anymore, not unless I come back.
Juneberry: It's call "New Sorcerer's Game" in the RP thread. |
Oh! The most recent reply one? I see. Good to know.
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yeah, and I admit defeat there, good shot.
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Eh? I'm not in that RP...Or are you talking about the battle system? -confused-
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The battle system lol.
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That's interesting that your RP turned into a story. Are you co-writing it with someone or something?
And June, my assignment is to write a first person narrative essay/story thing for my English honors class. The topic is that we have to choose a time in our life where we did something that took us courage to do even though we knew it was right. It has to be 3-4 pages long, double spaced. My essay/story is going to be coming out to my parents as an FtM transsexual, and starting the transition process to become my proper gender. That took me a lot of courage, because my mother's approval means everything to me...and she doesn't approve of this at all. |
Um, thank you =o You really don't have to mention anything on that subject though, I don't think. I appreciate it though. :3
Kea: Oh boy. That's a really strong one right there. Can I see afterward? |
No it's my personal story, based on an anime, and originally was based on an RP I was in about six months ago. This is more of a continuation of my character's life after that, but it's not important to know anything about that story to get this one.
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Yeah, it's a strong topic indeed. I am super nervous because we're doing peer revision too...o____o; But I am super determined to write this because this is the best example I can think of. And of course you'll be able to see it when I am done! <3
And ooh, gotcha Axion. ^^ That still sounds like fun. |
-glomps on to Axion-
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I may check that out. I like fantasy.
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Sounds like some deep stuff Keag, I wish you all the best of luck.
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My new battle wins and losses with Keagan are 1/3. Keagan is too good compared to me in battle D; -giggle fit-
And I wish you luck too. Though I know you won't need too much since you're an awesome writer ;D |
I hope you do well.
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Aww thanks for the good lucks and wishes everyone. :3 I'm super nervous to write it, like I said, but I"m hoping it will shed some light on the subject since it's such a misunderstood subject.
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You will do well so don't worry and it will work well.
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I have some friends that are really big on the transgender movement. California seems to be touching the subject lately.
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You're gonna be just fine. How many times have I had to tell you that and it always turns out okay? Silly little brother <3 -hugs- Just do your best and it'll work out fine!
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It makes me so happy to have so much support! ;w; Especially since my parents are so unsupportive of me.
So thanks guys for giving me the courage to write about this! And not wimp out of it. XD Now I just need to think of a good opening, OTL |
I always force you not to wimp out on things. I once dragged you to the principal's office when you were too afraid to ask for a change in schedule! >D -hugs-
Silly Kea. You know you're awesome. People love you :3 |
Write all the other parts then move back to the opening it works for most people. But you can do it, I know you will do well. That topic is touchy but you will write a great report.
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Whoo! Score! Almost done with the super long first paragraph! 8D
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Make sure your page breaks are good or the grammar nazis will never forgive you
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Axion: Oh Keagan knows that. He knows how mean I am with that ;D I correct our IMs sometimes 8D
Keagan: YAY! |
I hope my page breaks are okay. XD I'm not so good with knowing when to start paragraphs with dialog. I know when a new speaker starts speaking, but what about the same speaker in the same paragraph?
But yeah, other than that, my grammar is usually pretty good. I like to think so anyway. >.> |
I suck, but then again Eng is not my first language.
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I shall be your editor and assure you that it will be just fine! >D
...By the way, how come you're so good at being awesome? ;D |
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