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Rigel 08-12-2012 09:50 PM

I can see why you would do that. There are works that I've always thought of as subpar that others have liked. I'm not sure what about it appealed to me. I just really, really enjoyed reading it. Sorry I'm not more help. My brain is tapped right now because of my lack of sleep. |D;;

Suzerain of Sheol 08-12-2012 09:55 PM

Heh, that's okay. I actually have that happen pretty often. Everyone has different tastes. I'm glad you liked it, though. And thanks for reading. :)

Suzerain of Sheol 08-15-2013 12:06 AM

Aaaaaaand, one year later, Suze has produced... all of 1 poem! Huzzah!

Ultimus [M?]


Nexess 08-15-2013 11:57 PM

BI I enjoy your withdrawal poetry so much Suze.

Suzerain of Sheol 10-25-2013 09:27 PM

Being... poetically unproductive (to put it delicately) of late, I've tried recording some of the poems in this thread. I'm... reasonably satisfied with how they came out.

Demogorgon

In Victory's Garden

This Aurora was my Womb

Quiet Man Cometh 10-26-2013 04:52 AM

Is that you reciting them, Sheol? It's always different to hear a poem after reading it. There's some kind of deja'vu going on here, and I'm not sure why.

Suzerain of Sheol 10-26-2013 12:42 PM

No, it's a troupe of actors I hired to give voice to my poetry. :P

Yes, it's me.

Quiet Man Cometh 11-08-2013 05:45 AM

It always throws me when I hear the voice of someone that I normally only text with. I forget your voice is that low. Never sounds that way in my head.

Neat tool though. I'm tempted to try it myself, but I'm a little scared about what I'd sound like. I always sound higher on recordings than I do in my own head.

Suzerain of Sheol 11-08-2013 12:52 PM

My reading voice is a few octaves lower than my speaking voice, but I know what you mean. :P

Espy 11-08-2013 12:54 PM

Your speaking voice is already pretty low. -can't listen right now bc class-

Suzerain of Sheol 11-15-2013 07:32 PM

Emptiness, be thou my God


Quiet Man Cometh 11-15-2013 09:18 PM

Read the latter portion of it over a few times. It's interesting to compare it with what you described earlier when you wrote it.

Suzerain of Sheol 11-15-2013 10:51 PM

You've caught me. I must confess, my ability to pull ideal and Formal poetry from the abstraction of the ether without sullying it with the contamination of my state of mind at the time of writing is... less than without flaw. :P

Quiet Man Cometh 11-15-2013 11:29 PM

If it helps, I tend to write my poems out of order, and have now taken to leaving spaces in between the lines I write down so that I can feed other lines in between them as I think of them. I've written poems backwards on occasion.

Suzerain of Sheol 11-15-2013 11:31 PM

I actually wrote that in the stanzaic order of 1, 3, 4, 2. :P

Quiet Man Cometh 11-15-2013 11:53 PM

You know, I think I like it better that way, but for the line at the bottom. Not sure what to do with that.


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