@Espy: Can I have a friend critique it as well?

Sure. It's a really rough WIP, and I'm really too exhausted to have drawn particularly well XD

Nighty night, and danke.

oh crud XD i might need to get out the red pen, yeah there are some issues with it

WAIT ESPY, what program are you using? Illustrator or photoshop?
And are you trying to make a graphic image or something rendered?

Ulti can critique too? o3o

The shading for the cheekbone is too low. As you can see here:
the shading starts up by the top of the ear like this:

I think that is the main thing off about it. Other than that, I think it looks good ^^

poggers XD what is this an art school? hahahaha

I understood exactly what she said o.o

no, pog's hair X''D

Ohhhhh, gotcha owo;

Also, her vest is the wrong color, but whatevs

pants too dude XD pants too

True, but it's an event item, which doesn't come dark enough o3o;

again true XD

The Belts Pants or Straight Pants might work better -nod nod-

maybe but inez is the pants that went with it XD

Heh, I was just thinking because it looks like she wants something to go inside the boots owo;

well straight pants would do then

http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z...f.png~original

for espy, it's still rough but i tried to rectify the strange angle the light is coming in on, i hope it helps some but i am so tired i am about to fall asleep at my keys, nini and good morning dear

Hai people!

SAI. And just a drawing. Trying lineless again for the first time in a long while now that I am a bit better at shading...sort of.

Thanks! Yeah, he has a high cheekbone, which should have pushed the lighting up even higher.

Thank you. I tend to choose odd lighting angles; should really do something about that....

EDIT: Hi there, Polly. Also, what is it with the outfits?

I dunno, choco wanted to put me in some school uniform. It's probably like a fetish or something hehe

Well, it now includes you, Cho, Pogs, Gall, and Meiz...

-nod nod- It was before I joined hehe. If there was no one else doing it, I probably would not have XD

-rolls around the floor-

Hillo Everyone~ It is cold and wet and I hate my state

wait. waht did i walk in on?

*sprinkles pumpkin seeds and salt all over*

-the salt burns my skin- D8

looking at that skirt i would think salt would be good by you X'''D

Hehe, it's a reference to something I guess you don't get >w>;

all i can think is satanism, i however made a slut joke so same diff depending on the joke XD

Yeah, I implied I'm a demon/devil owo;

man it is late

Heh, not for me. I've stayed up much later on a school night than this haha.

yer but i was cleaning all day and i have to cook tommorrow XD

Hehe, okay okay >w> I won't even tell you what I did today -wink wink-

... Yeah, I don't know. Ignore me.

XD nah, you are too fun to ignore

Hello there! :D
Gosh..it's so cold here it actually snowed ; o ;

its rainy here. I'm worried about going out tonight. even for the little bit I'll be walking. :/

rain here too but i am staying inside so i am not too worried

o.o yes rain out the trick or treaters