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Suzerain of Sheol 01-27-2012 02:10 AM

That's a good point. It does seem weak. I haven't worked on this beyond the first time I sat down to write it, so it will need polishing if it does end up being used.

Glad you liked it, though. In case it wasn't obvious, I was drawing inspiration from Gabriel's reaping of the 185,000 men of Sennacherib with the scythe supposedly forged for him for that explicit purpose during the Creation. Which just seems incredibly badass to me.

Arsis_von_Neaera 01-27-2012 02:20 AM

Agreed. Incredibly. Have you ever read Lamentations?

Suzerain of Sheol 01-27-2012 02:26 AM

No, I don't believe I have. What is that?

Arsis_von_Neaera 01-27-2012 02:39 AM

The book of Lamentations, in the Bible. You should, you might enjoy it.

Suzerain of Sheol 01-27-2012 02:42 AM

I will do so.

*wonders why he has never heard of such of a thing*

Arsis_von_Neaera 01-27-2012 02:46 AM

Pffffft. *coffee spewed all over screen* What?! Your a man?!

Suzerain of Sheol 01-27-2012 02:47 AM

o_O Yeah, why? You thought I was a girl?

Arsis_von_Neaera 01-27-2012 02:53 AM

No... >.> <.< *ahem* Right, I posted. Do what you will with it.

Suzerain of Sheol 01-27-2012 02:58 AM

Right, then.

Well, I'm off for the night. Until the morrow.

Arsis_von_Neaera 01-27-2012 04:52 PM

Right, until today. A now of later. All that jazz.

Suzerain of Sheol 02-12-2012 02:34 AM

Turmoil in Heaven

kyza 02-13-2012 04:19 PM

i like your poem :)

Suzerain of Sheol 02-13-2012 04:26 PM

Which one, and why, if you please.

Arsis_von_Neaera 02-17-2012 01:46 PM

I feel as though we require more of you, Suze.

Suzerain of Sheol 02-17-2012 04:22 PM

How exactly do you mean?

Arsis_von_Neaera 02-18-2012 03:59 PM

I believe we need a shrubbery.


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